Please be advised,
Reinvention requires complete submersion,
The new you may clash,
With an earlier version,
Don’t be alarmed,
No need to flee,
Into yourself,
Just let it be,
Relax, reboot,
Then you will see,
Images will soon recede,
Then cease to bleed,
Through to your present day,
Interrupt, get in the way,
Just focus on your newer self,
Leave the old one on the shelf,
Your new software is much improved,
With several glitches removed,
Reprogramming of several faults,
Plus restoring your old defaults,
Change comes from what you desired,
So relax and let it be hard-wired,
Move on, and forget your old lives,
There’s a reason that they’re called archives.
yeah, let it hard wired.
at times, we do need to let things go and move on.
🙂
I like this one a lot. After all our brains are computers so naturally we’re going to need regular system upgrades and updates. Sometimes even a reboot.
Thanks! Yeah, as we get more and more technologized (?) it seems almost natural to think of ourselves in these terms.
This is great I do agree we are like a computer and need to have our system recharged and rebooted from time to time
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-925
What a great imagination! Your final line absolutely kicked this thing into mastery!
Really good!
Excellent! I really like what you did with the comparing our brains and thought processes to computers. Very well thought out and presented. Great poem!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/
Thanks all!
fabulous…
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Poetry Picnic.