Sad Face Haiku

Forecast calls for sun.
It should be sunny, but it
Rains disappointment.

12 thoughts on “Sad Face Haiku

    • No kidding! Especially when the forecast calls for full sun. I’ve had a friend ask me if I’m okay because this poem seems so sad. Of course it can be taken anyway you like, but I really only meant to express my disappointment in the inaccurate forecast. I’m actually in very good spirits. Thanks for reading!

  1. This is a great Haiku. I love that you respect the conventions and embed the reference to nature – so many people think a Haiku is just 5-7-5 syllables of any combination, when a true Haiku calls for natural imagery. I enjoyed the final line so much – unexpected and so right for the moment described!

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